Sunday, August 10, 2014

Facing my demons - 19

I arrive in the next circle
puking blood and sewage.
GASP!
for breath
but my lungs freeze.
COUGH!
HACK!
GASP!

2 comments:

  1. I totally understand that feeling! I'm not good at writing poetry, but I do enjoy it. Very nice :)

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    1. haha. You know, I don't consider myself very good at writing poetry either. But people seem to enjoy my stanzas anyway, which is why I love the online / blogging community so much.

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